Changeset 52ddd6c for chapter07/introduction.xml

Timestamp:

09/30/2022 04:24:14 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

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git-author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…> (09/30/2022 04:22:10 PM)

git-committer:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…> (09/30/2022 04:24:14 PM)

Message:

Clarify some things in Intro to chroot; simplify some verbiage.

File:

• chapter07/introduction.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter07/introduction.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>This chapter shows how to build the last missing bits of the temporary
-  system: the tools needed by the build machinery of various packages.  Now
+  system: the tools needed to build the various packages.  Now
   that all circular dependencies have been resolved, a <quote>chroot</quote>
   environment, completely isolated from the host operating system (except for
@@ -18 +18 @@
 
   <para>For proper operation of the isolated environment, some communication
-  with the running kernel must be established. This is done through the
+  with the running kernel must be established. This is done via the
   so-called <emphasis>Virtual Kernel File Systems</emphasis>, which must be
-  mounted when entering the chroot environment. You may want to check
-  that they are mounted by issuing <command>findmnt</command>.</para>
+  mounted before entering the chroot environment. You may want to verify
+  that they are mounted by issuing the <command>findmnt</command> command.</para>
 
   <para>Until <xref linkend="ch-tools-chroot"/>, the commands must be
@@ -28 +28 @@
   are run as &root;, fortunately without access to the OS of the computer
   you built LFS on. Be careful anyway, as it is easy to destroy the whole
-  LFS system with badly formed commands.</para>
+  LFS system with bad commands.</para>
 
 </sect1>