Changeset 53b5ccf for chapter08/reboot.xml

Timestamp:

03/19/2001 02:30:14 PM (24 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Balu Walter <tw@…>

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• chapter08/reboot.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter08/reboot.xml

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 <para>
 Now that all software has been installed, bootscripts have been created, 
-it's time for you to reboot your computer. Shutdown your system with
-shutdown -r now and reboot into LFS. After the reboot you will have a normal
-login prompt like you have on your normal Linux system (unless you use XDM or
-some sort of other Display Manger (like KDM - KDE's version of XDM).
+it's time to reboot the computer. The system is shutdown with
+shutdown -r now and rebooted into LFS. After the reboot a normal
+login prompt like on the normal Linux system comes up (unless XDM or
+some sort of other Display Manger is used (like KDM - KDE's version of XDM)).
 </para>
 
 <para>
-One thing remains to be done and that's setting up networking. After you
-rebooted and finished the next chapter of this book your LFS system is
-ready for use and you can do with it whatever you want.
+One thing remains to be done and that's setting up networking. After having
+rebooted and finished the next chapter of this book the LFS system is
+ready for use and can be used to do with it whatever is wanted.
 </para>