Changeset 54948b7 for chapter08/acl.xml

Timestamp:

11/21/2022 10:13:06 PM (17 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

777f469, f01f8a5

Parents:

651f491

Message:

Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors,
improve English idiom, clarify a few things, remove superfluous
verbiage, etc.

File:

• chapter08/acl.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter08/acl.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
 
     <para>The Acl package contains utilities to administer Access Control Lists,
-    which are used to define more fine-grained discretionary access rights for
+    which are used to define fine-grained discretionary access rights for
     files and directories.</para>
 
@@ -53 +53 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The Acl tests need to be run on a filesystem that supports access
-    controls after <application>Coreutils</application> has been built with the
-    Acl libraries.  If desired, return to this package and run <command>make
-    check</command> after <application>Coreutils</application> has been built
-    later in this chapter.</para>
+    <para>The Acl tests must be run on a filesystem that supports access
+    controls, but not until the <application>Coreutils</application> package has been built,
+    using the <application>Acl</application> libraries.  If desired, return to this package
+    and run <command>make check</command> after the <application>Coreutils</application>
+    package has been built.</para>
 
     <para>Install the package:</para>