Changeset 54948b7 for chapter08/attr.xml

Timestamp:

11/21/2022 10:13:06 PM (17 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

777f469, f01f8a5

Parents:

651f491

Message:

Straighten out capitalization, correct a few grammatical errors,
improve English idiom, clarify a few things, remove superfluous
verbiage, etc.

File:

• chapter08/attr.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter08/attr.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     <title/>
 
-    <para>The attr package contains utilities to administer the extended
-    attributes on filesystem objects.</para>
+    <para>The Attr package contains utilities to administer the extended
+    attributes of filesystem objects.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
@@ -53 +53 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="make">make</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The tests need to be run on a filesystem that supports extended
+    <para>The tests must be run on a filesystem that supports extended
     attributes such as the ext2, ext3, or ext4 filesystems.
     To test the results, issue:</para>