Changeset 55fa5a3

Timestamp:

05/23/2009 12:42:55 PM (15 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

71b1c20

Parents:

63f6e21

Message:

Various minor text changes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8903 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -42 +42 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
+          <para>[bdubbs] - Various minor text changes.  Thanks to Chris
+          Staub. Fixes
+          <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2407">#2407</ulink>.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Change the bootsripts and udev configuration
           so the rtc is set by udev upon boot. Removed aio device

chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml

@@ -78 +78 @@
           <para>Because the machine description in the <envar>LFS_TGT</envar>
           variable is slightly different than the value returned by the
-          config.guess script, this switch will tell the configure script to
-          adjust Binutil's build system for building a cross linker.
-          </para>
+          <command>config.guess</command> script, this switch will tell the
+          <command>configure</command> script to adjust Binutil's build system
+          for building a cross linker.  </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -62 +62 @@
 
     <para>Make the installed static libraries writable so debugging symbols can 
-    be removed later.</para>
+    be removed later:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w \

chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml

@@ -46 +46 @@
     <para>GCC now requires the GMP and MPFR packages. As these packages may
     not be included in your host distribution, they will be built with
-    GCC.</para>
+    GCC:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">tar -jxf ../mpfr-&mpfr-version;.tar.bz2

chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml

@@ -116 +116 @@
     </para>
 
-    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multlib spec for GCC ensures that it
+    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multilib spec for GCC ensures that it
     won't attempt to link against libraries on the host:</para>
 

chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
     <para>The E2fsprogs package contains the utilities for handling the
     <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> file system. It also
-    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> journaling
-    file system.</para>
+    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> and 
+    <systemitem class="filesystem">ext4</systemitem> journaling
+    file systems.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>