Changeset 55ffe68

Timestamp:

03/25/2001 08:17:59 AM (23 years ago)

Author:

Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

c85f976

Parents:

08463b5b

Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@362 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter03/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter03/mounting.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/bash-exp.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para>
-In this chapter the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
+In this chapter, the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
 going to be prepared. A new partition will be created, a file
-system will be created on it and the directory structure will be
+system will be created on it, and the directory structure will be
 created. When this is done, we can move on to the next chapter and start
 building a new Linux system from scratch.

chapter03/mounting.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 Now that we have created a file system, it is ready for use. All we have
 to do to be able to access it (as in reading data from and writing data to 
-it) is mounting it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can 
-be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever 
+it) is mount it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can 
+be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever
 needed to do. This book will assume that the partition was mounted 
 under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the 

chapter05/bash-exp.xml

@@ -45 +45 @@
 <para>
 The <userinput>&amp;&amp;</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
-the next command only to be executed when the previous command exists 
+the next command to be executed only if the previous command exists 
 with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
 commands are copy&amp;pasted 
-on the shell is is important to be ensured that if 
-./configure fails, make isn't being executed and likewise if make fails 
+on the shell, is is important to be ensured that if 
+./configure fails, make isn't being executed and, likewise, if make fails, 
 that make install isn't being executed, and so forth.
 </para>