Changeset 5e4e104

Timestamp:

04/16/2005 03:38:12 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

1e48022

Parents:

3ae818d

Message:

• Minor wording/typo fixes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@4975 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter07/udev.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -84 +84 @@
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Allard Welter)
+</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Peter Ennis)
 </para></listitem>

chapter07/udev.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
 resides entirely in memory and does not take up any disk space).
 Device nodes do not require much disk space, so the memory that is
-used in negligable.</para>
+used in negligible.</para>
 
 <sect2>
@@ -148 +148 @@
 <title>Handling Hotpluggable/Dynamic Devices</title>
 
-<para>When you plug in a device, such a Universal Serial Bus (USB) MP3 player, the kernel
+<para>When you plug in a device, such as a Universal Serial Bus (USB) MP3 player, the kernel
 recognizes that the device is now connected and generates a hotplug
 event. If the driver is already loaded (either because it was compiled