Changeset 6219892 for prologue

Timestamp:

10/23/2022 02:15:18 AM (21 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

98755ac

Parents:

00eeab8 (diff), a0ed201 (diff)
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/clfs-ng

File:

• prologue/errata.xml (modified) (1 diff)

prologue/errata.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
   and enhanced. Security warnings and bug fixes may become available after
   the LFS book has been released. To check whether the package versions or
-  instructions in this release of LFS need any modifications to accommodate
-  security vulnerabilities or other bug fixes, please visit
+  instructions in this release of LFS need any modifications—to repair
+  security vulnerabilities or to fix other bugs—please visit
   <ulink url="&errata;"/>
   before proceeding with your build. You should note any
-  changes shown and apply them to the relevant section of the book as you
-  progress with building the LFS system.</para>
+  changes shown and apply them to the relevant sections of the book as you
+  build the LFS system.</para>
 
   <para>In addition, the Linux From Scratch editors maintain a list of security
-  vulnerabilities discovered after a book was released. To check whether there
-  are any active security vulnerabilities, please visit
-  <ulink url="&secadv;"/> prior to proceeding with your build. You should note
-  any advisories and perform the steps to fix any security vulnerabilities as
-  you progress with building the LFS system.</para>
+  vulnerabilities discovered <emphasis>after</emphasis> a book has been released. To see
+  whether there  are any known security vulnerabilities, please visit
+  <ulink url="&secadv;"/> before proceeding with your build. You should also continue
+  to consult the advisories, and fix any security vulnerabilities, even
+  when the LFS system has been completely constructed.</para>
 
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