Changeset 69993f4 for chapter03/packages.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter03/packages.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

chapter03/packages.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
 
 <variablelist role="materials">
-<bridgehead renderas="sect3">Packages</bridgehead>
-
-<varlistentry>
-<term>Autoconf (&autoconf-version;) - 903 KB:</term>
+
+<varlistentry>
+<term>Autoconf (&autoconf-version;) - 903 kilobytes (KB):</term>
 <listitem>
 <para><ulink url="&freshmeat;autoconf/"/></para>
@@ -91 +90 @@
 
 <varlistentry>
-<term>File (&file-version;) - 356 KB: -- <emphasis>(see Note 1 below)</emphasis></term>
+<term>File (&file-version;) - 356 KB: <emphasis>(see Note 1)</emphasis></term>
 <listitem>
 <para><ulink url="&freshmeat;file/"/></para>
@@ -119 +118 @@
 
 <varlistentry>
-<term>GCC (&gcc-version;) - ~27,000KB:</term>
+<term>GCC (&gcc-version;) - 27,000 KB:</term>
 <listitem>
 <para><ulink url="&freshmeat;gcc/"/></para>
@@ -133 +132 @@
 
 <varlistentry>
-<term>Glibc (&glibc-version;) - 13,101 KB: -- <emphasis>(see Note 2 below)</emphasis></term>
+<term>Glibc (&glibc-version;) - 13,101 KB: <emphasis>(see Note 2)</emphasis></term>
 <listitem>
 <para><ulink url="&freshmeat;glibc/"/></para>
@@ -424 +423 @@
 
 <note><para>2) Released packages of Glibc are not new enough for our
-purposes, so create a tarball of an appropriate CVS with the following
+purposes, so create a tarball of an appropriate Concurrent Versions
+System (CVS) snapshot with the following
 commands:</para>
 
@@ -433 +433 @@
 tar jcvf glibc-2.3.4-20040701.tar.bz2 glibc-2.3.4-20040701</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>
-Alternatively, the LFS team developed a tarball which can be
-downloaded from any of the FTP mirrors listed on the LFS Website at
-<ulink url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html#http"/>. It
-is located under the <filename
-class="directory">/pub/lfs/packages/conglomeration/glibc</filename> directory.
-The tarball is signed using GPG, and it is strongly recommended that
-its authenticity be verified before use. Instructions for installing
-GnuPG, which enables verification, are provided in the BLFS
-book at <ulink url="&lfs-root;blfs/view/stable/postlfs/gnupg.html"/>.</para></note>
+<para> Alternatively, the LFS team developed a tarball which can be
+downloaded from any of the File Transfer Protocol (FTP) mirrors listed
+on the LFS Website at <ulink url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html#http"/>.
+It is located under the <filename
+class="directory">/pub/lfs/packages/conglomeration/glibc</filename>
+directory.  The tarball is signed using GNU Privacy Guard (GPG), and
+it is strongly recommended that its authenticity be verified before
+use. Instructions for installing GPG, which enables verification, are
+provided in the Beyond Linux From Scratch (BLFS) book at <ulink
+url="&lfs-root;blfs/view/stable/postlfs/gnupg.html"/>.</para></note>
 
 </sect1>