Changeset 69993f4 for chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

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6.0

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8b320e7

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ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

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• chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml

@@ -28 +28 @@
 <title>Installation of Binutils</title>
 
-<para>It is important that Binutils be the first package to get compiled,
-because both Glibc and GCC perform various tests on the available linker and
-assembler to determine which of their own features to enable.</para>
+<para>It is important that Binutils be the first package compiled
+because both Glibc and GCC perform various tests on the available
+linker and assembler to determine which of their own features to
+enable.</para>
 
 <para>This package is known to have issues when its default
@@ -101 +102 @@
 test suite, but at this early stage the test suite framework (Tcl,
 Expect, and DejaGNU) is not yet in place. The benefits of running the
-tests at this point would be minimal since the programs from this
+tests at this point are minimal since the programs from this
 first pass will soon be replaced by those from the second.</para>
 
@@ -130 +131 @@
 <filename class="directory">ld</filename> subdirectory. Specifying the LIB_PATH
 Makefile variable on the command line allows us to override the default value
-and point it to our temporary tools location. The value of this variable
+and point it to the temporary tools location. The value of this variable
 specifies the linker's default library search path. This preparation
 is used later in the chapter.</para></listitem>
@@ -143 +144 @@
 
 <sect2 role="content"><title/>
-<para>The details on this package are found in <xref linkend="contents-binutils"/>.</para>
+<para>Details on this package are located in <xref linkend="contents-binutils"/>.</para>
 </sect2>