Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/bzip2.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/bzip2.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter06/bzip2.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 <sect2 role="package"><title/>
 <para>The Bzip2 package contains programs for compressing and decompressing
-files. On text files they achieve a much better compression than the
+files. Text files yield a much better compression than with the
 traditional <command>gzip</command>.</para>
 
@@ -24 +24 @@
 <segtitle>Bzip2 installation depends on</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils,
-GCC, Glibc, Make</seg></seglistitem>
+GCC, Glibc, and Make</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -45 +45 @@
 <screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>If you are reinstalling Bzip2, perform
+<para>If reinstalling Bzip2, perform
 <userinput>rm -f /usr/bin/bz*</userinput> first, otherwise the following
 <command>make install</command> will fail.</para>
@@ -73 +73 @@
 <segtitle>Installed libraries</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>bunzip2 (link to bzip2), bzcat (link to bzip2), bzcmp, bzdiff,
-bzegrep, bzfgrep, bzgrep, bzip2, bzip2recover, bzless and bzmore</seg>
+bzegrep, bzfgrep, bzgrep, bzip2, bzip2recover, bzless ,and bzmore</seg>
 <seg>libbz2.a, libbz2.so (link to libbz2.so.1.0), libbz2.so.1.0 (link to 
-libbz2.so.&bzip2-version;) and libbz2.so.&bzip2-version;</seg></seglistitem>
+libbz2.so.&bzip2-version;), and libbz2.so.&bzip2-version;</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>