Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/chroot.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/chroot.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter06/chroot.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 ]>
 <sect1 id="ch-system-chroot">
-<title>Entering the chroot environment</title>
+<title>Entering the Chroot Environment</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="chroot.html"?>
 
-<para>It is time to enter the chroot environment in order to begin
+<para>It is time to enter the chroot environment to begin
 building and installing the final LFS system. As user
 <emphasis>root</emphasis>, run the following command to enter the
@@ -32 +32 @@
 a good place to set them again.</para>
 
-<para>From this point on there is no need to use the
+<para>From this point on, there is no need to use the
 <emphasis>LFS</emphasis> variable anymore, because all work will be
 restricted to the LFS file system.  This is because the Bash shell is
@@ -41 +41 @@
 temporary tool will not be used anymore as soon as its final version
 is installed. This occurs when the shell does not <quote>remember</quote> the
-locations of executed binaries -- for this reason, hashing is switched
+locations of executed binaries&mdash;for this reason, hashing is switched
 off by passing the +h option to bash.</para>
 
 <para>It is important that all the commands throughout the remainder
-of this chapter and the following chapters are run from within the
+of this chapter and the following chapters be run from within the
 chroot environment. If you leave this environment for any reason
 (rebooting for example), remember to first mount the <systemitem