Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/gzip.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/gzip.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter06/gzip.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
 <segtitle>Gzip installation depends on</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils,
-GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make, Sed</seg></seglistitem>
+GCC, Glibc, Grep, Make, and Sed</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -66 +66 @@
 <seglistitem><seg>gunzip (link to gzip), gzexe,
 gzip, uncompress (link to gunzip), zcat (link to gzip), zcmp, zdiff,
-zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore and znew</seg></seglistitem>
+zegrep, zfgrep, zforce, zgrep, zless, zmore, and znew</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 
@@ -83 +83 @@
 <term><command>gzexe</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>used to create self-uncompressing executable files.</para>
+<para>creates self-uncompressing executable files.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip gzexe"><primary sortas="b-gzexe">gzexe</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -91 +91 @@
 <term><command>gzip</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>compresses the given files, using Lempel-Ziv (LZ77) coding.</para>
+<para>compresses the given files using Lempel-Ziv (LZ77) coding.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip gzip"><primary sortas="b-gzip">gzip</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
@@ -173 +173 @@
 <term><command>znew</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>re-compresses files from <command>compress</command> format to <command>gzip</command> format 
--- <filename class="extension">.Z</filename> to <filename class="extension">.gz</filename>.</para>
+<para>re-compresses files from <command>compress</command> format to
+<command>gzip</command> format&mdash;<filename class="extension">.Z</filename>
+to <filename class="extension">.gz</filename>.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-gzip znew"><primary sortas="b-znew">znew</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>