Changeset 69993f4 for chapter06/procps.xml

Timestamp:

08/29/2004 06:36:34 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

8b320e7

Parents:

ec0a37e6

Message:

Second round of edits for final release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/procps.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter06/procps.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
 <segtitle>Procps installation depends on</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, GCC, Glibc,
-Make, Ncurses</seg></seglistitem>
+Make, and Ncurses</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 </sect2>
@@ -33 +33 @@
 <screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Install the packag:</para>
+<para>Install the package:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
@@ -50 +50 @@
 <segtitle>Installed library</segtitle>
 <seglistitem><seg>free, kill, pgrep, pkill,
-pmap, ps, skill, snice, sysctl, tload, top, uptime, vmstat, w and watch</seg>
+pmap, ps, skill, snice, sysctl, tload, top, uptime, vmstat, w, and watch</seg>
 <seg>libproc.so</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
@@ -160 +160 @@
 <listitem>
 <para>reports virtual memory statistics, giving information about
-processes, memory, paging, block IO, traps, and CPU activity.</para>
+processes, memory, paging, block Input/Output (IO), traps, and CPU activity.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-procps vmstat"><primary sortas="b-vmstat">vmstat</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>