Changeset 699b0f2 for chapter08

Timestamp:

02/01/2009 11:38:45 PM (15 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

eae8d88

Parents:

873f3aa

Message:

Fix some typos and grammar issues reported by Chris Staub in #2307.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8800 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter08/grub.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter08/grub.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
     <title>Installation of GRUB</title>
 
+    <para>Your shiny new LFS system is almost complete. One of the last
+    things to do is to ensure that the system can be properly booted.</para>
+
     <caution>
       <para>This package will only build for x86 and x86_64 architectures
       containing 32-bit libs. If you chose to build on x86_64 without 32-bit
-      libriaries (no multilib), then you must use LILO instead.</para>
+      libraries (no multilib), then you must use LILO instead. Information on
+      <quote>boot loading</quote> for other architectures should be available in
+      the usual resource-specific locations for those architectures.</para>
     </caution>
 
@@ -99 +104 @@
     <title>Configuring GRUB</title>
 
-    <para>Your shiny new LFS system is almost complete. One of the last
-    things to do is to ensure that the system can be properly booted. The
-    instructions below apply only to computers of IA-32 architecture,
-    meaning mainstream PCs. Information on <quote>boot loading</quote> for
-    other architectures should be available in the usual resource-specific
-    locations for those architectures.</para>
 
     <para>Boot loading can be a complex area, so a few cautionary
@@ -113 +112 @@
     unusable (un-bootable).</para>
 
-    <para>Earlier, we compiled and installed the GRUB boot loader software
-    in preparation for this step. The procedure involves writing some
-    special GRUB files to specific locations on the hard drive. We highly
-    recommend creating a GRUB boot floppy diskette as a backup. Insert a
-    blank floppy diskette and run the following commands:</para>
+    <para>The procedure involves writing some special GRUB files to specific
+    locations on the hard drive. We highly recommend creating a GRUB boot floppy
+    diskette as a backup. Insert a blank floppy diskette and run the following
+    commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>dd if=/boot/grub/stage1 of=/dev/fd0 bs=512 count=1