Changeset 6a156bab for chapter08/introduction.xml

Timestamp:

06/12/2020 04:40:07 AM (4 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

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Children:

26fec27

Parents:

ea7ec72

Message:

Mostly text updates in Chapter 8.
There are a couple of minor command changes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11924 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter08/introduction.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter08/introduction.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <para>In this chapter, we enter the building site and start constructing the
-  LFS system in earnest. That is, we chroot into the temporary mini Linux system,
-  make a few final preparations, and then begin installing the packages.</para>
+  <para>In this chapter, we start constructing the LFS system in earnest.
+  </para>
 
   <para>The installation of this software is straightforward. Although in many
@@ -42 +41 @@
   space is required during this building process. Following the installation
   instructions, there is a list of programs and libraries (along with brief
-  descriptions of these) that the package installs.</para>
+  descriptions) that the package installs.</para>
 
-  <note><para>The SBU values and required disk space includes
-  test suite data for all applicable packages in
-  <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>.</para></note>
+  <note><para>The SBU values and required disk space includes test suite data
+  for all applicable packages in <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>. SBU
+  values have been calculated using a single CPU core (-j1) for all
+  operations.</para></note>
 
   <sect2>
@@ -53 +53 @@
     <para>In general, the LFS editors discourage building and installing static
     libraries.  The original purpose for most static libraries has been made
-    obsolete in a modern Linux system.  In addition linking a static library
+    obsolete in a modern Linux system.  In addition, linking a static library
     into a program can be detrimental.  If an update to the library is needed
     to remove a security problem, all programs that use the static library will
@@ -60 +60 @@
     do the linking) may not even be known.</para>
 
-    <para>In the procedures in Chapter&nbsp;6, we remove or disable installation of
+    <para>In the procedures in this chapter, we remove or disable installation of
     most static libraries. Usually this is done by passing a
     <option>--disable-static</option> option to <command>configure</command>.