Changeset 6c952e3 for chapter11

Timestamp:

09/19/2022 06:38:55 AM (2 years ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

1f6dfd4

Parents:

1203312 (diff), 3d65730e (diff)
Note: this is a merge changeset, the changes displayed below correspond to the merge itself.
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/clfs-ng

Location:

chapter11

Files:

• afterlfs.xml (added)
• chapter11.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• reboot.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• theend.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• whatnow.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter11/chapter11.xml

@@ -16 +16 @@
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="reboot.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="whatnow.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="afterlfs.xml"/>
 
 </chapter>

chapter11/reboot.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
 
   <title>Rebooting the System</title>
+  <para>
+    Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to reboot
+    your computer. However, there are still a few things to check.
+    Here are some suggestions:</para>
 
-  <para>Now that all of the software has been installed, it is time to reboot
-  your computer. However, you should be aware of a few things. The system you
+
+<!--
+  The system you
   have created in this book is quite minimal, and most likely will not have
   the functionality you would need to be able to continue forward. By installing
@@ -18 +23 @@
   environment, you can leave yourself in a much better position to continue on
   once you reboot into your new LFS installation. Here are some suggestions:</para>
-
+-->
   <itemizedlist>
-
+<!--
     <listitem><para>A text mode browser such as <ulink
     url='&blfs-book;basicnet/lynx.html'>Lynx</ulink>
@@ -61 +66 @@
     url='&blfs-book;basicnet/wpa_supplicant.html'>wpa_supplicant</ulink>.
     </para></listitem>
+-->
+    <listitem>
+      <para>
+        Install any <ulink
+        url='&blfs-book;postlfs/firmware.html'>firmware</ulink> needed if the
+        kernel driver for your hardware requires some firmware files to function
+        properly.
+      </para>
+    </listitem>
 
-    <listitem><para>Install <ulink
-    url='&blfs-book;postlfs/firmware.html'>firmwares</ulink> if the kernel
-    driver for your hardware require some firmware to function properly.
-    </para></listitem>
-
-    <listitem><para>Finally, a review of the following configuration files
-    is also appropriate at this point.</para>
+    <listitem>
+      <para>
+        A review of the following configuration files
+        is also appropriate at this point.
+      </para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
@@ -98 +110 @@
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>sync</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>
+  <para>Now, reboot the system:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>reboot -ff</userinput></screen>

chapter11/theend.xml

@@ -61 +61 @@
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Be sure to put some sort of customization for the fields
-  'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and 'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely
-  yours.</para>
+  <para>Be sure to customize the fields 'DISTRIB_CODENAME' and
+  'VERSION_CODENAME' to make the system uniquely yours.</para>
 
 </sect1>

chapter11/whatnow.xml

@@ -9 +9 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="whatnow.html"?>
 
-  <title>What Now?</title>
+  <title>Additional Resources</title>
 
   <para>Thank you for reading this LFS book. We hope that you have
@@ -32 +32 @@
 
         <listitem>
-          <para><ulink url="http://www.cert.org/">CERT</ulink> (Computer
-          Emergency Response Team)</para>
+          <para><ulink url="&lfs-root;lfs/advisories/">LFS Security Advisories</ulink></para>
 
-          <para>CERT has a mailing list that publishes security alerts concerning
-          various operating systems and applications. Subscription information is
-          available at <ulink
-          url="http://www.us-cert.gov/cas/signup.html"/>.</para>
+          <para>This is a list of security vulnerabilities discovered in the
+          LFS book after it's published.</para>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para>Bugtraq</para>
+          <para><ulink url="https://seclists.org/oss-sec/">Open Source Security 
+          Mailing List</ulink></para>
 
-          <para>Bugtraq is a full-disclosure computer security mailing list. It
-          publishes newly discovered security issues, and occasionally potential
-          fixes for them. Subscription information is available at <ulink
-          url="http://www.securityfocus.com/archive"/>.</para>
+          <para>This is a mailing list for discussion of security flaws,
+          concepts, and practices in the Open Source community.</para>
         </listitem>
 
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
-
+<!--
     <listitem>
       <para>Beyond Linux From Scratch</para>
@@ -61 +57 @@
       </para>
     </listitem>
-
+-->
     <listitem>
       <para>LFS Hints</para>
@@ -86 +82 @@
       collaborate on all of the issues of Linux documentation. The TLDP features
       a large collection of HOWTOs, guides, and man pages.  It is located at
-      <ulink url="http://www.tldp.org/"/>.</para>
+      <ulink url="https://tldp.org/"/>.</para>
     </listitem>