Changeset 6d46ee62

Timestamp:

10/17/2022 08:30:27 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

86f3868

Parents:

ee0959b

Message:

Made grammatical corrections, clarified a few things.

File:

• chapter01/resources.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter01/resources.xml

@@ -16 +16 @@
     <para>If during the building of the LFS system you encounter any
     errors, have any questions, or think there is a typo in the book,
-    please start by consulting the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ)
-    that is located at <ulink url="&faq-root;"/>.</para>
+    please start by consulting the list of Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ),
+    located at <ulink url="&faq-root;"/>.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -26 +26 @@
     <para>The <uri>linuxfromscratch.org</uri> server hosts a number of mailing
     lists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists include the
-    main development and support lists, among others. If the FAQ does not solve
+    main development and support lists, among others. If the FAQ do not solve
     the problem you are having, the next step would be to search the mailing
     lists at <ulink url="&lfs-root;search.html"/>.</para>
@@ -54 +54 @@
     <title>IRC</title>
 
-    <para>Several members of the LFS community offer assistance on Internet
-    Relay Chat (IRC). Before using this support, please make sure that your
+    <para>Several members of the LFS community offer assistance via Internet
+    Relay Chat (IRC). Before using this support, please make sure your
     question is not already answered in the LFS FAQ or the mailing list
     archives. You can find the IRC network at <uri>irc.libera.chat</uri>.