Changeset 6dfcfecc for prologue

Timestamp:

03/31/2021 10:41:39 AM (3 years ago)

Author:

Xℹ Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

ml-11.0, multilib

Children:

7610848

Parents:

811b5a39

git-author:

Thomas Trepl <thomas@…> (06/29/2020 07:55:01 AM)

git-committer:

Xℹ Ruoyao <xry111@…> (03/31/2021 10:41:39 AM)

Message:

Update to new lfs structure

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/multilib@11986 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

prologue

Files:

• architecture.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• organization.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• typography.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• why.xml (modified) (10 diffs)

prologue/architecture.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
 and is 22% larger than the 32-bit build. If you plan to use LFS as a LAMP
 server, or a firewall, a 32-bit CPU may be largely sufficient. On the other
-hand, several packages in BLFS now need more that 4GB of RAM to be built
+hand, several packages in BLFS now need more than 4GB of RAM to be built
 and/or to run, so that if you plan to use LFS as a desktop, the LFS authors
 recommend building on a 64-bit system.</para>

prologue/organization.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
 
   <sect2>
-    <title>Part III - Building the LFS System</title>
+    <title>Part III - Building the LFS Cross Toolchain and Temporary Tools</title>
 
-    <para>Part III guides the reader through the building of the LFS
+    <para>Part III provides instructions for building the tools
+    needed for constructing the final LFS system.</para>
+  </sect2>
+
+  <sect2>
+    <title>Part IV - Building the LFS System</title>
+
+    <para>Part IV guides the reader through the building of the LFS
     system&mdash;compiling and installing all the packages one by one,
     setting up the boot scripts, and installing the kernel. The resulting
@@ -41 +48 @@
   </sect2>
 
+  <sect2>
+    <title>Part V - Appendices</title>
+
+    <para>Part V provides information about the book itself including
+    acronyms and terms, acknowledgments, package dependencies, 
+    a listing of LFS boot scripts, licenses for the distribution of the 
+    book, and a comprehensive index of packages, programs, libraries, 
+    and scripts.</para>
+  </sect2>
+
 </sect1>

prologue/typography.xml

@@ -81 +81 @@
   matches <quote>passwd</quote>, which will be
   <filename>/usr/share/man/man1/passwd.1</filename>. For this example, you will
-  need to run <command>man 5 passwd</command> in order to read the specific page
-  being referred to. It should be noted that most man pages do not have duplicate
+  need to run <command>man 5 passwd</command> in order to read the page
+  being specified. Note that most man pages do not have duplicate
   page names in different sections. Therefore, <command>man <replaceable>&lt;program
   name&gt;</replaceable></command> is generally sufficient.</para>

prologue/why.xml

@@ -119 +119 @@
         <para>DejaGNU</para>
 
-        <para>This package contains a framework for testing other programs.
-        It is only installed in the temporary toolchain.</para>
+        <para>This package contains a framework for testing other programs.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -142 +141 @@
         <para>Eudev</para>
 
-        <para>This package is a device manager.  It dynamically controls the entries
-        in the /dev directory as devices are added or removed from the system.
+        <para>This package is a device manager.  It dynamically controls the ownership,
+        permissions, names, and symbolic links of devices in the /dev directory as 
+        devices are added or removed from the system.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -167 +167 @@
 
         <para>This package contains a utility for determining the type of a
-        given file or files. A few packages need it to build.</para>
+        given file or files. A few packages need it in their build scripts.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -195 +195 @@
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Gcc</para>
+        <para>GCC</para>
 
         <para>This package is the Gnu Compiler Collection.  It contains the
@@ -219 +219 @@
         <para>Glibc</para>
 
-        <para>This package contains the main C library.  Linux programs would
+        <para>This package contains the main C library.  Linux programs will
         not run without it.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -227 +227 @@
 
         <para>This package contains math libraries that provide useful functions
-        for arbitrary precision arithmetic.  It is required to build Gcc.</para>
+        for arbitrary precision arithmetic.  It is required to build GCC.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -417 +417 @@
 
         <para>This package contains functions for the arithmetic of complex
-        numbers. It is required by Gcc.</para>
+        numbers. It is required by GCC.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -424 +424 @@
 
         <para>This package contains functions for multiple precision
-        arithmetic.  It is required by Gcc.</para>
+        arithmetic.  It is required by GCC.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -473 +473 @@
         <para>Pkg-config</para>
 
-        <para>This package provides a program to return meta-data about an
+        <para>This package provides a program that returns meta-data about an
         installed library or package.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -559 +559 @@
 
         <para>This package contains the Tool Command Language used
-        in many test suites in LFS packages.  It is only installed in
-        the temporary toolchain.</para>
+        in many test suites in LFS packages.</para>
       </listitem>