Changeset 6e41459 for chapter05/util-linux.xml

Timestamp:

08/08/2004 02:10:39 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

ef13657

Parents:

78349b7

Message:

Completed global edits for upcoming 6.0 release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@3999 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter05/util-linux.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter05/util-linux.xml

@@ -28 +28 @@
 <title>Installation of Util-linux</title>
 
-<para>Util-linux has issues with the Linux 2.6 kernel series - fix these issues
-by applying the following patch:</para>
+<para>Util-linux has issues with the Linux 2.6 kernel series. These
+issues can be fixed by applying the following patch:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../util-linux-&util-linux-version;-kernel_headers-1.patch</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Util-linux doesn't use the freshly installed headers and libraries
-from the <filename class="directory">/tools</filename> directory.  This is fixed by altering the configure
-script:</para>
+<para>Util-linux does not use the freshly installed headers and
+libraries from the <filename class="directory">/tools</filename>
+directory. This is fixed by altering the configure script:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's@/usr/include@/tools/include@g' configure</userinput></screen>
@@ -47 +47 @@
 <screen><userinput>make -C lib</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Since you'll only need a couple of the utilities contained in
-this package, build just those:</para>
+<para>Since only a couple of the utilities contained in this package
+are needed, build only those:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make -C mount mount umount
@@ -63 +63 @@
 </sect2>
 </sect1>
+