Changeset 7115c88

Timestamp:

11/18/2022 06:29:26 AM (17 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

8d5322e, cc197d0

Parents:

f8b1860

git-author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…> (11/18/2022 06:28:29 AM)

git-committer:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…> (11/18/2022 06:29:26 AM)

Message:

chapter08: fix minor grammar issues

File:

• chapter08/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter08/introduction.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
   optimizations.</para>
 
-  <para>On the other hand, we keeps the optimizations enabled by the default
-  configuration of packages.  In addition, we sometimes explicitly enable an
-  optimized configuration provided by the package but not enabled by
+  <para>On the other hand, we keep the optimizations enabled by the default
+  configuration of the packages.  In addition, we sometimes explicitly enable an
+  optimized configuration provided by a package but not enabled by
   default.  The package maintainers have already tested these configurations
   and consider them safe, so it's not likely they would break the build.