Changeset 72fb9bf

Timestamp:

05/16/2016 10:12:01 PM (8 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

230381d

Parents:

5007961

Message:

Moved Host System Requirements to Chapter 2
and made minor editorial changes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11061 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter02/chapter02.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter02/hostreqs.xml (moved) (moved from prologue/hostreqs.xml ) (3 diffs)
• chapter02/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prologue/preface.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -40 +40 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
+          <para>[bdubbs] - Moved Host System Requirements to Chapter 2
+          and made minor editorial changes.</para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Updated to tar-1.29. Fixes
           <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3932">#3932</ulink>.</para>

chapter02/chapter02.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="chapter02.html"?>
 
-  <title>Preparing a New Partition</title>
+  <title>Preparing the Host System</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="hostreqs.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="creatingpartition.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="creatingfilesystem.xml"/>

chapter02/hostreqs.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
     your distribution provides them.</para>
 
-   <para>Earlier versions of the listed software packages may work, but has not
-   been tested.</para>
+   <para>Earlier versions of the listed software packages may work, but have
+   not been tested.</para>
 
   <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
@@ -144 +144 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>Note that the symlinks mentioned above are required to build an LFS
-  system using the instructions contained within this book. Symlinks that
-  point to other software (such as dash, mawk, etc.) may work, but are not
-  tested or supported by the LFS development team, and may require either
-  deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some
-  packages.</para>
+  <important>
+    <para>Note that the symlinks mentioned above are required to build an LFS
+    system using the instructions contained within this book. Symlinks that
+    point to other software (such as dash, mawk, etc.) may work, but are not
+    tested or supported by the LFS development team, and may require either
+    deviation from the instructions or additional patches to some
+    packages.</para>
+  </important>
 
   <!-- Use an empty sect2 element to prevent a pdf warning.  -->
-  <sect2 id="version-check" xreflabel="Section vii, Host System Requirements">
-  <title> </title>
+  <bridgehead renderas="sect2" 
+              id="version-check" 
+              xreflabel="Host System Requirements">
+  </bridgehead>
+  <!--<title> </title>-->
 
   <para >To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, and
@@ -235 +240 @@
 
 
-</sect2>
+<!--</sect2>-->
 </sect1>

chapter02/introduction.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <para>In this chapter, the partition which will host the LFS system is
-  prepared. We will create the partition itself, create a file system
-  on it, and mount it.</para>
+  <para>In this chapter, the host tools needed for building LFS
+  are checked and, if necessary, installed.  Then a partition which will 
+  host the LFS system is prepared. We will create the partition 
+  itself, create a file system on it, and mount it.</para>
 
 </sect1>

prologue/preface.xml

@@ -18 +18 @@
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="why.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="prerequisites.xml"/>
-  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="hostreqs.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="typography.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="organization.xml"/>