Changeset 76d113f for chapter06

Timestamp:

09/21/2003 03:05:40 AM (21 years ago)

Author:

Greg Schafer <greg@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

ebd8ee2

Parents:

dc19fb6

Message:

Toolchain related textual adjustments.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2854 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
 
 <caution><para>It is imperative at this point to stop and ensure that the
-basic functionality of the adjusted toolchain is working as expected. We are
-going to perform a simple sanity check:</para>
+basic functions (compiling and linking) of the adjusted toolchain are working
+as expected. For this we are going to perform a simple sanity check:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>echo 'main(){}' > dummy.c
@@ -44 +44 @@
 readelf -l a.out | grep ': /lib'</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>If everything is working correctly, the output of the last command will
-be:</para>
+<para>If everything is working correctly, there should be no errors, and the
+output of the last command will be:</para>
 
 <para><screen>[Requesting program interpreter: /lib/ld-linux.so.2]
 </screen></para>
 
-<para>If you did not receive the output as shown above then something is
+<para>If you did not receive the output as shown above, then something is
 seriously wrong. You will need to investigate and retrace your steps to find
 out where the problem is and correct it. There is no point in continuing
-until this is done. Most likely, something went wrong with the specs file
+until this is done. Most likely something went wrong with the specs file
 amendment above. Note especially that <filename>/lib</filename> now appears as
 the prefix of our dynamic linker. Of course, if you are working on a platform
 where the name of the dynamic linker is something other than <filename>
-ld-linux.so.2</filename> then the output will be slightly different.</para>
+ld-linux.so.2</filename>, then the output will be slightly different.</para>
 
 <para>Once you are satisfied that all is well, clean up the test files:</para>