Changeset 77ae47c

Timestamp:

03/22/2001 04:07:23 AM (23 years ago)

Author:

Simon Perreault <nomis80@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

50f183f

Parents:

d251197

Message:

Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@349 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter03/creatingpart.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter03/creatingpart.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
 partition on which we can build our new system. I recommend a partition size
 of around 750 MB. This gives enough space to store all the tarballs and 
-to compile all packages without worrying running out of the necessary 
+to compile all packages without worrying about running out of the necessary 
 temporary disk space. If a Linux Native partition is already available, 
 this subsection can be skipped.
@@ -14 +14 @@
 The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program the user prefers) is
 started with the
-appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if he wants to create a
-new partition on the primary master IDE disk). He creates a Linux Native
-partition, writes the partition table and exits the cfdisk program. 
+appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if the gentle reader
+wants to create a
+new partition on the primary master IDE disk). It is used to create a Linux
+Native partition, write the partition table and exit the cfdisk program. 
 The new partition's designation should be remembered. It could be something
 like hda11 (as it is in my case). This newly created partition will be