Changeset 7928e023 for chapter01/how.xml

Timestamp:

04/14/2010 09:45:02 PM (14 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

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Children:

ed8ff7d

Parents:

2e7948a

Message:

Minor rewording.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@9244 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter01/how.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
   providing all the tools you need to successfully follow the instructions in
   this book. The LiveCD version is behind the current book, but is still useful
-  as a host for building the current book.  It is recommended you use the
-  <quote>-nosrc</quote> or <quote>-min</quote> versions of the LiveCD with the
-  current book's instructions.  For more information about the LFS LiveCD or to
-  download a copy, visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
+  as a host for building the current book.  The <quote>-nosrc</quote> or
+  <quote>-min</quote> editions of the LiveCD are the most appropriate for
+  building a current LFS system.  For more information about the LFS LiveCD or
+  to download a copy, visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
 
   <note>