Changeset 79ac947

Timestamp:

12/06/2022 05:04:37 PM (17 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

7c263b6

Parents:

9aff8c4

Message:

Correct capitalization. Correct spellig: "test suite" is two words.
Use the personal relative pronoun "who" when referring to a person.

File:

• chapter08/bash.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter08/bash.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     <title/>
 
-    <para>The Bash package contains the Bourne-Again SHell.</para>
+    <para>The Bash package contains the Bourne-Again Shell.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
@@ -74 +74 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="test">chown -Rv tester .</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The testsuite of the package is designed to be run as a non-&root;
-    user that owns the terminal connected to standard input.  To satisfy the
+    <para>The test suite of this package is designed to be run as a non-&root;
+    user who owns the terminal connected to standard input.  To satisfy the
     requirement, spawn a new pseudo terminal using
     <application>Expect</application> and run the tests as the <systemitem