Changeset 81793c6e for chapter03/packages.xml

Timestamp:

09/23/2022 07:57:48 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

1cb4a25b

Parents:

50e70db

Message:

Minor changes to verbiage in chapter 3.2 (All Packages)

File:

• chapter03/packages.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter03/packages.xml

@@ -16 +16 @@
     package should be used to avoid security vulnerabilities.</para>
 
-    <para>The upstreams may remove old releases, especially when these
+    <para>The upstream sources may remove old releases, especially when those
     releases contain a security vulnerability.  If one URL below is not
     reachable, you should read the security advisories first to figure out
@@ -22 +22 @@
     not, try to download the removed package from a mirror.  Although it's
     possible to download an old release from a mirror even if this release
-    has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not recommended to
-    use a release known to be vulnerable for building your system.</para>
+    has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not a good idea to
+    use a release known to be vulnerable when building your system.</para>
   </note>
 
@@ -454 +454 @@
 
         <note>
-          <para>The Linux kernel is updated relatively often, many times due to
+          <para>The Linux kernel is updated quite frequently, many times due to
           discoveries of security vulnerabilities.  The latest available
           <!--&linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;.x--> stable kernel