Changeset 83c6411

Timestamp:

09/29/2004 08:06:11 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Manuel Canales Esparcia <manuel@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

00caac0

Parents:

b9626c1

Message:

Tags & typo corrections.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@4251 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter06

Files:

• strippingagain.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• sysvinit.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter06/strippingagain.xml

@@ -1 +1 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd">
+<!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd" [
+  <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../general.ent">
+  %general-entities;
+]>
 <sect1 id="ch-system-strippingagain">
 <title>Stripping Again</title>
@@ -13 +16 @@
 <para>Most people who use the command mentioned below do not
 experience any difficulties. However, it is easy to make a typo and
-render the new system unusable, so before running the strip command,
-it is a good idea to make a backup of the current
-situation.</para>
+render the new system unusable, so before running the 
+<command>strip</command> command, it is a good idea to make a
+backup of the current situation.</para>
 
 <para>Before performing the stripping, take special care to ensure that
@@ -43 +46 @@
 
 <para>If disk space is very tight, the
-<parameter>--strip-all</parameter> options can be used on the binaries
+<parameter>--strip-all</parameter> option can be used on the binaries
 in <filename class="directory">/{,usr/}{bin,sbin}</filename> to gain
 several more megabytes. Do not use this option on libraries&mdash;they will

chapter06/sysvinit.xml

@@ -104 +104 @@
 before doing anything else. This escape sequence switches the console
 character set to a user-defined one, which can be modified by running
-the <command>setfont</command> program. The console initscript from
-the LFS-Bootscripts package calls the <command>setfont</command>
+the <command>setfont</command> program. The <command>console</command>
+initscript from the LFS-Bootscripts package calls the <command>setfont</command>
 program during system startup. Sending this escape sequence is
 necessary for people who use non-ISO 8859-1 screen fonts, but it does
@@ -142 +142 @@
 <listitem>
 <para>the first process to be started when the kernel has initialized
-the hardware. Init takes over the boot process and starts all the
-proceses it is instructed to.</para>
+the hardware. <command>init</command> takes over the boot process and 
+starts all the proceses it is instructed to.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-sysvinit init"><primary sortas="b-init">init</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>