Changeset 843710f for chapter03/packages.xml

Timestamp:

08/08/2004 02:10:10 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

6.0

Children:

78349b7

Parents:

9a207c4

Message:

Completed global edits for upcoming 6.0 release

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/testing/BOOK@3997 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter03/packages.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter03/packages.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 ]>
 <sect1 id="materials-packages">
-<title>All the packages</title>
+<title>All Packages</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="packages.html"?>
 
@@ -415 +415 @@
 <para>Total size of these packages: 135 MB</para>
 
-<note><para>1) File (&file-version;) may not be available by the time you read
-this. The site administrators of the master download location are known to occasionally
-remove old versions when new ones are released. An alternative download location
-that may have older versions available is <ulink
-url="ftp://gaosu.rave.org/pub/linux/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
-
-<note><para>2) Released packages of Glibc are not new enough for our purposes,
-so create a tarball of some known-good CVS with the following commands:</para>
+<note><para>1) File (&file-version;) may no longer be available at the
+listed location. The site administrators of the master download
+location occasionally remove older versions when new ones are
+released. An alternative download location that may have the correct
+version available is <ulink
+url="ftp://ftp.lfs-matrix.de/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
+
+<note><para>2) Released packages of Glibc are not new enough for our
+purposes, so create a tarball of an appropriate CVS with the following
+commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cvs -z 3 -d :pserver:anoncvs@sources.redhat.com:/cvs/glibc \
@@ -430 +432 @@
 tar jcvf glibc-2.3.4-20040701.tar.bz2 glibc-2.3.4-20040701</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Alternatively, we've made our own tarball available which you can download
-from any of the FTP mirrors listed on the
-<ulink url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html#http">LFS Website</ulink>.  It can be
-found under the
-<filename>/pub/lfs/packages/conglomeration/glibc</filename> directory.
-The tarball is signed using GPG, and it is strongly recommended you
-verify its authenticity.  Instructions for installing GnuPG, which enables you
-to do this, are given in the
-<ulink url="&lfs-root;blfs/view/stable/postlfs/gnupg.html">BLFS book.</ulink>
-</para>
-</note>
+<para>
+Alternatively, the LFS team developed a tarball which can be
+downloaded from any of the FTP mirrors listed on the LFS Website at
+<ulink url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html#http"/>. It
+is located under the <filename
+class="directory">/pub/lfs/packages/conglomeration/glibc</filename> directory.
+The tarball is signed using GPG, and it is strongly recommended that
+its authenticity be verified before use. Instructions for installing
+GnuPG, which enables verification, are provided in the BLFS
+book at <ulink url="&lfs-root;blfs/view/stable/postlfs/gnupg.html"/>.</para></note>
 
 </sect1>
+