Changeset 8f10e6fa for chapter08/libelf.xml

Timestamp:

12/06/2022 08:56:58 PM (17 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

df5d0e3, e9c46b3

Parents:

5042efcc

Message:

Patch up English idiom here and there.

File:

• chapter08/libelf.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter08/libelf.xml

@@ -42 +42 @@
     <title>Installation of Libelf</title>
 
-      <para>Libelf is part of elfutils-&elfutils-version; package. Use
-      the elfutils-&elfutils-version;.tar.bz2 as the source tarball.</para>
+      <para>Libelf is part of the elfutils-&elfutils-version; package. Use
+      the elfutils-&elfutils-version;.tar.bz2 file as the source tarball.</para>
 
     <para>Prepare Libelf for compilation:</para>
@@ -60 +60 @@
 
     <para>One test named <filename>run-low_high_pc.sh</filename> is known to
-    fail on 32-bit x86 system.</para>
+    fail on 32-bit x86 systems.</para>
 
     <para>Install only Libelf:</para>