Changeset 9254148

Timestamp:

09/21/2022 08:53:38 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

6612f54

Parents:

17a807a

Message:

Corrected English idiom, fixed some typos in chapter 2.3 (Stages)

File:

• chapter02/stages.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

chapter02/stages.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
 
   <sect2>
-  <title>Chapter&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title>
+  <title>Chapters&nbsp;5&ndash;6</title>
 
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -45 +45 @@
         <para>These two chapters <emphasis>must</emphasis> be done as user
         <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>.
-        A <command>su - lfs</command> needs to be done before any task in these
-        chapters. Failing to do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
+        A <command>su - lfs</command> comand must be issued before any task in these
+        chapters. If you don't do that, you are at risk of installing packages to the
         host, and potentially rendering it unusable.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -55 +55 @@
          doubt about installing a package, ensure any previously expanded
          tarballs are removed, then re-extract the package files, and complete all
-         instructions in that section.</para>
+         the instructions in that section.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -61 +61 @@
 
   <sect2>
-  <title>Chapter&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title>
+  <title>Chapters&nbsp;7&ndash;10</title>
 
     <itemizedlist>
@@ -70 +70 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to
-        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote> must be done as the
+        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote>, must be done as the
         <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, with the LFS
         environment variable set for the &root; user.</para>
@@ -78 +78 @@
          <para> When entering chroot, the LFS environment variable must be set
          for <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. The LFS
-         variable is not used afterwards.</para>
+         variable is not used after entering the chroot environment.</para>
       </listitem>