Changeset 967d78e

Timestamp:

06/29/2014 03:37:13 PM (10 years ago)

Author:

Krejzi <krejzi@…>

Branches:

7.6-systemd, 7.7-systemd, 7.8-systemd, 7.9-systemd

Children:

39507e9

Parents:

364f16f

Message:

More Systemd -> systemd renaming, fix ordering and wording in chapter07 introduction, removed final leftovers from network scripts.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/systemd/BOOK@10597 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/whatsnew.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter07/clock.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter07/console.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter07/introduction.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• chapter07/locale.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• chapter07/udev.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter08/kernel.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter09/theend.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/whatsnew.xml

@@ -137 +137 @@
     </listitem>-->
     <!--<listitem>
-      <para>LFS-Network-Scripts &lfs-network-scripts-version;</para>
-    </listitem>-->
-    <!--<listitem>
       <para>Libcap-&libcap-version;</para>
     </listitem>-->

chapter07/clock.xml

@@ -71 +71 @@
 
   <note><para>Please note that <command>timedatectl</command> command can
-  be used only on a system booted with Systemd.</para></note>
+  be used only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
 </sect1>

chapter07/console.xml

@@ -88 +88 @@
 
   <note><para>Please note that <command>localectl</command> command can
-  be used  only on a system booted with Systemd.</para></note>
+  be used  only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
   <para>You can also use <command>localectl</command> utility with the

chapter07/introduction.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <para>This chapter discusses configuration files and boot scripts.
+  <para>This chapter discusses configuration files and systemd services.
   First, the general configuration files needed to set up networking are
   presented.</para>
@@ -18 +18 @@
      <listitem>
        <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-network" role="."/></para>
+     </listitem>
+     <listitem>
+       <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-hostname" role="."/></para>
      </listitem>
      <listitem>
@@ -36 +39 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>Third, configuring the hostname, system clock, and keyboard layout.</para>
+  <para>Third, configuring the system clock and keyboard layout.</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
-     <listitem>
-       <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-hostname" role="."/></para>
-     </listitem>
      <listitem>
        <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-clock" role="."/></para>

chapter07/locale.xml

@@ -120 +120 @@
 
   <para>Note that you can modify <filename>/etc/locale.conf</filename> with
-  Systemd <command>localectl</command> utility. To use <command>localectl</command>
+  systemd <command>localectl</command> utility. To use <command>localectl</command>
   for the example above, run:</para>
 
@@ -134 +134 @@
 
   <note><para>Please note that <command>localectl</command> command can
-  be used  only on a system booted with Systemd.</para></note>
+  be used  only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
   <para>The <quote>C</quote> (default) and <quote>en_US</quote> (the recommended

chapter07/udev.xml

@@ -17 +17 @@
 
   <para>In <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>, we installed Udev
-  from the Systemd source package. Before we go into the details regarding
+  from the systemd source package. Before we go into the details regarding
   how this works, a brief history of previous methods of handling devices
   is in order.</para>

chapter08/kernel.xml

@@ -95 +95 @@
 
     <note><para>While "The IPv6 Protocol" is not strictly required, it is
-    highly recommended by the Systemd developers.</para></note>
+    highly recommended by the systemd developers.</para></note>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>make LANG=<replaceable>&lt;host_LANG_value&gt;</replaceable> LC_ALL= menuconfig</userinput></screen>

chapter09/theend.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
 
   <para>Create an <filename>/etc/os-release</filename> file required by
-  Systemd:</para>
+  systemd:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cat &gt; /etc/os-release &lt;&lt; "EOF"
@@ -29 +29 @@
 
   <para>It is recommended to create <filename>/etc/lfs-release</filename>
-  for compatibility with non Systemd branch. By having this file, it is very
+  for compatibility with non systemd branch. By having this file, it is very
   easy for you (and for us if you need to ask for help at some point) to find
   out which LFS version is installed on the system. Create this file by