Changeset 96f1ce6 for chapter01/othermodes.xml

Timestamp:

08/02/2001 12:09:37 AM (23 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

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Children:

c4a3bc0

Parents:

07faea30

Message:

grammar fixes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@883 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter01/othermodes.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter01/othermodes.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Other list modes</title>
 
-<para>The modes that can be set by a user require to send an email to
+<para>The modes that can be set by a user require sending an email to
 <ulink url="mailto:listar@linuxfromscratch.org">listar@linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>. 
 The modes themselves are set by writing
-the appropriate commands in the subject headers of the message.</para>
+the appropriate commands in the subject header of the message.</para>
 
 <para>As the name implies, the <emphasis>Set command</emphasis> tells what
@@ -15 +15 @@
 the mode is going to be applied to. If more than one mode is to be set (to
 the same list or multiple lists) with one email, this can be done by
-leaving the subject header blank and write all the commands in the body of 
+leaving the subject header blank and writing all the commands in the body of 
 the message instead.</para>
 
@@ -30 +30 @@
 <para>All lists have the digest mode available which can be set after a user
 has subscribed to a list. Being in digest mode will
-cause to stop receiving individual messages as they are posted to
-the list and instead send one email daily containing all
+cause you to stop receiving individual messages as they are posted to
+the list and instead receive one email a day containing all
 the messages posted to the list during that day.</para>
 
@@ -37 +37 @@
 mode he will receive the daily digests but will also continue to
 receive the individual messages to the lists as they are posted. To
-set this mode <emphasis>digest2</emphasis> has to be written instead of
-<emphasis>digest</emphasis> in the subject header.</para>
+set this mode, substiture <emphasis>digest</emphasis for 
+<emphasis>digest2</emphasis> in the command.</para>
 
 </sect2>
@@ -51 +51 @@
 
 <para>If a user is going to be away for a while or wishes to stop receiving
-messages from the lists but doesn't want to unsubscribe, he can set
+messages from the lists but doesn't want to unsubscribe, he can change
 to vacation mode. This has the same effect as unsubscribing,
 but without having to go through the unsubscribe process and