Changeset 9e7475a for chapter08/dbus.xml

Timestamp:

06/12/2020 09:04:48 PM (4 years ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

4234aea6

Parents:

a3d0817

Message:

Updates to chapter09 for systemd

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11929 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter08/dbus.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter08/dbus.xml

@@ -64 +64 @@
         <term><parameter>--with-console-auth-dir=/run/console</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This specifies the location of the ConsoleKit auth
+          <para>This specifies the location of the ConsoleKit authorization
           directory.</para>
         </listitem>
@@ -92 +92 @@
 ln -sfv ../../lib/$(readlink /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so) /usr/lib/libdbus-1.so</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Create a symlink, so that D-Bus and systemd can use the same
+    <para>Create a symlink so that D-Bus and systemd can use the same
     <filename>machine-id</filename> file:</para>
 
@@ -131 +131 @@
         <term><command>dbus-cleanup-sockets</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Used to clean up leftover sockets in a directory</para>
+          <para>is used to remove leftover sockets in a directory</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-cleanup-sockets">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-cleanup-sockets">dbus-cleanup-sockets</primary>
@@ -141 +141 @@
         <term><command>dbus-daemon</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>The D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
+          <para>Is the D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-daemon">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-daemon">dbus-daemon</primary>
@@ -194 +194 @@
         <term><command>dbus-test-tool</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>A tool to help packages test
+          <para>Is a tool to help packages test
           <application>D-Bus</application></para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-test-tool">