Changeset 9e7475a for chapter09/introductiond.xml

Timestamp:

06/12/2020 09:04:48 PM (4 years ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

4234aea6

Parents:

a3d0817

Message:

Updates to chapter09 for systemd

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11929 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter09/introductiond.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter09/introductiond.xml

@@ -39 +39 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>Third, configuring the system clock and keyboard layout.</para>
+  <para>Third, configuring the system clock and keyboard layout is shown.</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
@@ -50 +50 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
-
   <para>Fourth, a brief introduction to the scripts and configuration
-  files used when the user logs into the system.</para>
+  files used when the user logs into the system is presented.</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
@@ -63 +62 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>And finally, configuring the systemd behavior.</para>
+  <para>And finally, configuring the behavior of systemd is discussed.</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>