Changeset 9ff39e28

Timestamp:

05/08/2006 10:37:15 PM (17 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/parallelism, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008

Children:

dbbea91

Parents:

1b737e6

Message:

Fix a couple of typos in Chapter 3

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7597 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter03/introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded for
-  building a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions
-  of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on their use. We
-  highly recommend not using newer versions because the build commands for one
-  version may not work with a newer version. The newest package versions may also
-  have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed
-  and stabilized in the development version of the book.</para>
+  <para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded in
+  order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to
+  versions of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on
+  their use. We highly recommend against using newer versions because the build
+  commands for one version may not work with a newer version. The newest package
+  versions may also have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds
+  will be developed and stabilized in the development version of the
+  book.</para>
 
   <para>Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download
@@ -35 +36 @@
   of the building process.</para>
 
-  <para>To create this directory, execute, as user <systemitem
-  class="username">root</systemitem>, the following command before starting
-  the download session:</para>
+  <para>To create this directory, execute the following command, as user
+  <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, before starting the download
+  session:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>mkdir -v $LFS/sources</userinput></screen>