Changeset 9fffe5f

Timestamp:

03/16/2001 10:10:08 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Balu Walter <tw@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_0, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

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Parents:

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Message:

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git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@332 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter04

Files:

• chapter04.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• packages.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter04/chapter04.xml

@@ -1 +1 @@
 <chapter id="chapter03">
-<title>Packages you need to download</title>
+<title>Packages that need to be downloaded</title>
 
 &c3-introduction;

chapter04/introduction.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para>
-Below is a list of all the packages you need to download for building
+Below is a list of all the packages that are needed to download for building
 the basic system. The version numbers printed correspond to versions of
-the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. If you
-experience problems which you can't solve yourself, download the version that
-is assumed in this book (in case you downloaded a newer version).
+the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. 
+If the user 
+experiences problems which he can't solve himself, he should download the
+version that
+is assumed in this book (in case he downloaded a newer version).
 </para>
 
@@ -21 +23 @@
 in <ulink url="appendixc.html">Appendix C - Official download locations
 </ulink>. The LFS FTP archive only contains the versions of packages 
-that are recommended for use in this book. If you're looking
-for newer versions than the ones listed here you can have a look in 
-Appendix C.
+that are recommended for use in this book. Newer versions than the ones
+listed here might be found after having a look in Appendix C.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 Please note that all files downloaded from the LFS FTP archive are files
-compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If you don't know how to handle bz2
-files, please read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
+compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If the user does not know how to
+handle bz2
+files, he should read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
 the software</ulink>.
 </para>

chapter04/packages.xml

@@ -1 +1 @@
 <sect1 id="ch03-packages">
-<title>Packages you need to download</title>
+<title>Packages that need to be downloaded</title>
 
 <literallayout>