Changeset a2cd10f for chapter07

Timestamp:

06/03/2002 11:27:19 AM (22 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

19c068f

Parents:

f50aec7

Message:

applied Alex's commas.patch

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1960 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter07

Files:

• network.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• usage.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter07/network.xml

@@ -55 +55 @@
 <para>Of course, the values of those variables have to be changed 
 in every file to match the proper setup. If the ONBOOT variable is set
-to yes, the network script will bring it up during boot up of the system.
-If set to anything else but yes it will be ignored by the network script
+to yes, the network script will bring it up during the booting of the system.
+If set to anything else but yes, it will be ignored by the network script
 and thus not brought up.</para>
 

chapter07/usage.xml

@@ -81 +81 @@
 </itemizedlist>
 
-<para>Feel free to modify the way the boot process works (after all it's your 
-LFS system, not ours). The files here are just an example of how it can be 
-done in a nice way (well what we consider nice anyway. You may hate it).</para>
+<para>Feel free to modify the way the boot process works (after all, it's your 
+own LFS system). The files given here are just an example of how it can be 
+done in a nice way (well, what we consider nice -- you may hate it).</para>
 
 </sect1>