Changeset a2cd10f for chapter09

Timestamp:

06/03/2002 11:27:19 AM (22 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

19c068f

Parents:

f50aec7

Message:

applied Alex's commas.patch

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1960 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter09/theend.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter09/theend.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 
 <para>Well done! You have finished installing your LFS system. It may have
-been a long process but it was well worth it. We wish you a lot of fun
+been a long process, but we hope it was worth it. We wish you a lot of fun
 with your new shiny custom built Linux system.</para>
 
@@ -18 +18 @@
 you run this command. There's a slight chance it may backfire on you and
 render your system unusable (mostly by destroying your kernel modules
-and dynamic &amp; shared libraries). This is more often caused by typo's
+and dynamic &amp; shared libraries). This is caused more often by typos
 than by a problem with the command used.</para>
 
@@ -24 +24 @@
 harmless under normal circumstances. It doesn't strip anything vital from 
 the files. It also is quite safe to use --strip-all on regular programs
-(don't use that on libraries - they will be destroyed) but it's not as
-safe and the space you gain is not all that much. But if you're tight on
-disk space every little bit helps, so decide yourself. Please refer to
+(don't use that on libraries - they will be destroyed), but it's not as
+safe, and the space you gain is not all that much. But if you're tight on
+disk space every little bit helps, so decide for yourself. Please refer to
 the strip man page for other strip options you can use. The general idea
-is to not run strip on libraries (other than --strip-debug) just to be
+is to not run strip on libraries (other than --strip-debug), just to be
 on the safe side.</para>