Changeset a76cbca for chapter06

Timestamp:

07/18/2006 06:29:09 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

6.2

Children:

8996cc9f

Parents:

2e3e489

Message:

Text corrections thanks to Chris Staub

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.2/BOOK@7684 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter06

Files:

• findutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• readline.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• shadow.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• sysklogd.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• udev.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter06/findutils.xml

@@ -72 +72 @@
     may not be available during the early stages of booting, this program
     needs to be on the root partition.  The <command>updatedb</command>
-    script also needs to correct an explicit path.</para> 
+    script also needs to be modified to correct an explicit path:</para> 
 
 <screen><userinput>mv -v /usr/bin/find /bin</userinput>

chapter06/readline.xml

@@ -87 +87 @@
     <para>Next, remove the <filename class="extension">.so</filename> files in
     <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and relink them into <filename
-    class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>.</para>
+    class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>rm -v /lib/lib{readline,history}.so

chapter06/shadow.xml

@@ -63 +63 @@
 
     <para>Disable the installation of the <command>groups</command> program
-    and its man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
+    and its man pages, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's/groups$(EXEEXT) //' src/Makefile

chapter06/sysklogd.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
 
     <para>The following patch fixes various issues, including a problem building
-    Sysklogd with Linux 2.6 series kernels</para>
+    Sysklogd with Linux 2.6 series kernels:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&sysklogd-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>
@@ -43 +43 @@
     <para>The following patch makes sysklogd treat bytes in the 0x80--0x9f range
     literally in the messages being logged, instead of replacing them with octal
-    codes. Unpatched sysklogd would damage messages in the UTF-8 encoding.</para>
+    codes. Unpatched sysklogd would damage messages in the UTF-8 encoding:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&sysklogd-8bit-patch;</userinput></screen>

chapter06/udev.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
 
     <para>The udev-config tarball contains LFS-specific files used to configure
-    Udev.</para>
+    Udev. Unpack it into the Udev source directory:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>tar xf ../&udev-config;.tar.bz2</userinput></screen>