Changeset aa0a1be

Timestamp:

05/24/2009 06:26:02 AM (15 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

80470e9

Parents:

77355e7b

Message:

Edits suggested by Bruce.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8909 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• prologue/foreword.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

prologue/foreword.xml

@@ -49 +49 @@
 there at the time. But it was my own creation. It was very satisfying to
 have put together such a system yourself. The only thing better would have
-been to create each piece of software yourself. This was the next best
+been to create each piece of software myself. This was the next best
 thing.</para>
 
@@ -64 +64 @@
 build your own system. While this book provides a template that will result
 in a correctly working system, you are free to alter the instructions to
-suit yourself . that is the whole point of the project after all. You
+suit yourself, which is in part the whole point of this project after all. You
 remain in control; we just lend a helping hand to get you started on your
 own journey.</para>