Changeset b76a6bb

Timestamp:

10/10/2003 05:10:38 AM (21 years ago)

Author:

Billy O 'Connor <billyoc@…>

Branches:

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Children:

1f0f472

Parents:

efa9cef

Message:

Grammatical correction.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2964 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• preface/audience.xml (modified) (1 diff)

preface/audience.xml

@@ -67 +67 @@
 <title>Who would not want to read this book</title>
 
-<para>There are probably some, for whatever reason, would feel that they do not 
+<para>There are probably some who, for whatever reason, would feel that they do not 
 want to read this book. If you do not wish to build your own Linux system from 
 scratch, then you probably don't want to read this book. Our goal is to help