Changeset bcd0ce7 for chapter06

Timestamp:

11/20/2003 12:45:59 AM (21 years ago)

Author:

Greg Schafer <greg@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

37dcf2a

Parents:

538aa7a

Message:

Miscellaneous fixes from list.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@3116 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter06

Files:

• perl.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• zlib.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter06/perl.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
 above.</para>
 
-<para>The meaning of the configure directive:</para>
+<para>The meaning of the configure option:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para><userinput>-Dpager="/bin/less -isR"</userinput>: This corrects
-an error in the perldoc code with the invocation of the less program</para></listitem>
+an error in the perldoc code with the invocation of the less
+program.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 

chapter06/zlib.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --shared</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Note: Zlib is known to build its shared library incorrectly if a CFLAGS
-is specified in the environment. If you are using your own CFLAGS variables,
-ensure you add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis> directive during
-this stage, and remove it afterwards.</para>
+<note><para>Zlib is known to build its shared library incorrectly if CFLAGS is
+specified in the environment. If you are using your own CFLAGS variable, be
+sure to add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis> directive to your
+CFLAGS for the duration of the above command, then remove it
+afterwards.</para></note>
 
 <para>Compile the package:</para>