Changeset cba199e

Timestamp:

04/16/2005 03:19:11 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

6.1, 6.1.1

Children:

d47f763

Parents:

cb82640

Message:

• Minor wording/typo fixes (merge from trunk r4973)

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@4974 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prologue/foreword.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -83 +83 @@
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Peter Ennis)
+</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Removed references to statically linking
 the pass 1 toolchain which should have gone as part of bug 1061 (Andrew Benton)

prologue/foreword.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="foreword.html"?>
 
-<para>My adventures in Linux began six years ago when I downloaded and
+<para>My adventures in Linux began in 1998 when I downloaded and
 installed my first distribution. After working with it for awhile, I
 discovered issues I definitely would have liked to see improved upon.
@@ -38 +38 @@
 Linux community, it became apparent that there was sustained interest
 in the ideas set forth in my Linux adventures. Such custom-built LFS
-systems not only to meet user specifications and requirements, but
+systems serve not only to meet user specifications and requirements, but
 also serve as an ideal learning opportunity for programmers and system
 administrators to enhance their Linux skills. Out of this broadened