Changeset d10c9d9

Timestamp:

07/26/2009 07:18:48 PM (15 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

6.5

Children:

2a43360

Parents:

3e684f3

Message:

Various text and grammar updates. Thanks to Chris Staub for the patch. Fixes #2458.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.5/BOOK@9001 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter05/gawk.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/perl.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/tcl.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter06/gcc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter06/gmp.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• chapter09/reboot.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter05/gawk.xml

@@ -55 +55 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>This parameter bypasses the search for mktime in
-          <command>configure</command> and uses the version in glibc. This is
+          <command>configure</command> and uses the version in Glibc. This is
           necessary due to a change in GCC that has not been incorporated into
           this package yet.</para>

chapter05/perl.xml

@@ -76 +76 @@
 
     <para>Only a few of the utilities contained in this package, and one of its
-    libraries need to be built:</para>
+    libraries, need to be built:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="make">make perl utilities ext/Errno/pm_to_blib</userinput></screen>

chapter05/tcl.xml

@@ -102 +102 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>tclsh (link to tclsh8.5) and tclsh8.5</seg>
-        <seg>libtcl8.5.so</seg>
+        <seg>libtcl8.5.so, libtclstub8.5.a</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
@@ -141 +141 @@
       </varlistentry>
 
+      <varlistentry id="libtclstub8.5.a">
+        <term><filename class="libraryfile">libtclstub8.5.a</filename></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>The Tcl Stub library</para>
+          <indexterm zone="ch-tools-tcl libtclstub8.5.a">
+            <primary sortas="c-libtclstub8.5.a">libtclstub8.5.a</primary>
+          </indexterm>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+
     </variablelist>
 

chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -125 +125 @@
 
     <para>Make the installed static libraries writable so debugging symbols can 
-    be removed later.</para>
+    be removed later:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w /usr/lib/{libcom_err,libe2p,libext2fs,libss}.a</userinput></screen>

chapter06/gcc.xml

@@ -213 +213 @@
 
    <para>A 64-bit system may see a few more directories. For example, here
-   is the output from a x86_64 machine:</para>
+   is the output from an x86_64 machine:</para>
 
 <screen><computeroutput>SEARCH_DIR("/usr/x86_64-unknown-linux-gnu/lib64")

chapter06/gmp.xml

@@ -56 +56 @@
 
     <variablelist>
-      <title>The meaning of the new configure option:</title>
+      <title>The meaning of the new configure options:</title>
 
       <varlistentry>
@@ -62 +62 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>This parameter enables C++ support</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term><parameter>--enable-mpbsd</parameter></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>This builds the Berkeley MP compatibility library</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

chapter09/reboot.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
 <screen><userinput>logout</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Then unmount the virtual files systems:</para>
+  <para>Then unmount the virtual file systems:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount -v $LFS/dev/pts