Changes in chapter08/sysklogd.xml [6a156bab:d15c80e]

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• chapter08/sysklogd.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter08/sysklogd.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     <title/>
 
-    <para>The sysklogd package contains programs for logging system messages,
-    such as those given by the kernel when unusual things happen.</para>
+    <para>The Sysklogd package contains programs for logging system messages,
+    such as those emitted by the kernel when unusual things happen.</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
@@ -42 +42 @@
     <title>Installation of Sysklogd</title>
 
-    <para>First, fix problems that causes a segmentation fault under
-    some conditions in klogd and fix an obsolete program construct:</para>
+    <para>First, fix a problem that causes a segmentation fault in klogd
+    under some conditions, and fix an obsolete program construct:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '/Error loading kernel symbols/{n;n;d}' ksym_mod.c