Changeset d6346a7

Timestamp:

11/18/2022 08:44:18 PM (17 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

651f491

Parents:

ea90fca

Message:

Rectify a redundancy/explain how to say tcl. Use correct spelling for
the Binutils package. Patch up an ungrammatical sentence (the plural
subject "instructions" requires pural verbs).

File:

• chapter08/tcl.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter08/tcl.xml

@@ -28 +28 @@
     <para>The <application>Tcl</application> package contains the Tool Command Language,
     a robust general-purpose scripting language. The <application>Expect</application> package
-    is written in the <application>Tcl</application> language.</para>
+    is written in <application>Tcl</application> (pronounced "tickle").</para>
 
     <segmentedlist>
@@ -46 +46 @@
 
     <para>This package and the next two (Expect and DejaGNU) are
-    installed to support running the test suites for binutils and GCC and other
+    installed to support running the test suites for Binutils, GCC and other
     packages.  Installing three packages for testing purposes may seem
     excessive, but it is very reassuring, if not essential, to know that the
@@ -88 +88 @@
 
     <para>The various <quote>sed</quote> instructions after the
-    <quote>make</quote> command removes references to the build directory from
-    the configuration files and replaces them with the install directory.
-    This is not mandatory for the remainder of LFS, but may be needed in case a
+    <quote>make</quote> command remove references to the build directory from
+    the configuration files and replace them with the install directory.
+    This is not mandatory for the remainder of LFS, but may be needed if a
     package built later uses Tcl.</para>