Changeset d9de0f90

Timestamp:

10/27/2001 02:58:42 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Mark Hymers <markh@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v3_1, v3_2, v3_3, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

2443baa

Parents:

18b6e01e

Message:

Changed appendixa/introduction.xml text

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1327 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• appendixa/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• index.xml (modified) (1 diff)

appendixa/introduction.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="appendixa"?>
 
-<para>This appendix describes the following aspect of each and every package
+<para>This appendix describes the following aspects of every package
 that is installed in this book:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 
-<listitem><para>        What every package contains</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>What the package contains.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>        What every program from a package does</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>What each program from a package does.</para></listitem>
 
 </itemizedlist>
 
 <para>The packages are listed in the same order as they are installed in
-chapter 5 (Intel system) or chapter 11 (PPC systems).</para>
+chapter 5 and chapter 6.</para>
 
 <para>Most information about these packages (especially the descriptions of
-it) come from the man pages from those packages. I'm not going to print
-the entire man page, just the core elements to make it possible to understand
- what
-a program does. To get knowledge of all details on a program, I suggest
-to start by reading the complete man page in addition to this appendix.</para>
+then) come from the man pages from those packages. We are not going to print
+the entire man page, just the core elements to make it possible to
+understand what a program does. To get knowledge of all details on a program, 
+we suggest you start by reading the complete man page in addition to 
+this appendix.</para>
 
-<para>Certain packages are documented more in depth
-than others, because I just happen to know more about certain
-packages than I know about others. If anything should be added on the
-following descriptions, please don't hesitate to email me. This list is
-going to contain an in depth description of every package installed, but
-I can't do this on my own. I have had help from various people but more
-help is needed.</para>
+<para>Certain packages are documented in more depth
+than others, because we just happen to know more about certain
+packages than I know about others. If anything should be added to the
+following descriptions, please don't hesitate to email the mailing
+lists.  We intend that the list should contain an in-depth description 
+of every package installed, but we can't do it without help.</para>
 
 <para>Please note that currently only what a package does is described and not
-why it needs to be installed. That will be added later.</para>
+why it needs to be installed.  This may be added later.</para>
 
 </sect1>

index.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 <!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
 
-<!ENTITY version "20011024">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "October 24th, 2001">
+<!ENTITY version "20011027">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "October 27th, 2001">
 
 <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">