Changeset d9f0c46

Timestamp:

06/15/2004 05:40:23 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

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Children:

31bee15

Parents:

0bc8e6e

Message:

More typo fixes (Anderson Lizardo)

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@3793 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter05/adjusting.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter05/adjusting.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
 <para>Now that the temporary C libraries have been installed, all
 the tools compiled in the rest of this chapter should be linked against these
-libraries. In order to accomplish this the linker, and the compiler's
+libraries. In order to accomplish this, the linker and the compiler's
 specs file, need to be adjsted.</para>
 
@@ -16 +16 @@
 below this line</quote></emphasis>, but it is really very simple.</para>
 
-<para>First the adjusted linker is installed (adjusted at the end of the first pass
-of Binutils), by running the following command from within
+<para>First, the linker, adjusted at the end of the first pass of Binutils, is
+installed by running the following command from within
 the <filename class="directory">binutils-build</filename> directory:</para>
 
@@ -46 +46 @@
 unset SPECFILE</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>It is recommended that the above command be cut-and-pasted in order to ensure correctness - Alternatively the specs file can be edited by hand. This is done simply by replacing every occurrence of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
+<para>It is recommended that the above command be cut-and-pasted in order to
+ensure correctness - Alternatively, the specs file can be edited by hand. This
+is done simply by replacing every occurrence of
+<quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.
+</para>
 
 <para> Be sure to visually inspect the specs file in order to verify the intended changes have been made.</para>
@@ -67 +71 @@
 <caution><para>It is imperative at this point to stop and ensure that the basic
 functions (compiling and linking) of the new toolchain are working as expected.
-To perform a simple sanity check run the following commands:</para>
+To perform a simple sanity check, run the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo 'main(){}' &gt; dummy.c
@@ -86 +90 @@
 problem is and correct it. There is no point in continuing until this is done.
 First, perform the sanity check again, using <command>gcc</command> instead of
-<command>cc</command>. If this works then the
+<command>cc</command>. If this works, then the
 <filename class="symlink">/tools/bin/cc</filename> symlink is missing. Revisit
 <xref linkend="ch-tools-gcc-pass1"/> and install the symlink. Second, ensure your PATH