Changeset da6e70f


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Timestamp:
11/26/2022 06:26:21 PM (2 months ago)
Author:
David Bryant <davidbryant@…>
Branches:
multilib, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/clfs-ng
Children:
38311c3, b1c68c7
Parents:
295e337
Message:

Edited Pierre's recent additons,to improve English idiom. Also corrected
capitalization of a title.

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2 edited

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  • chapter04/creatingminlayout.xml

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    99  <?dbhtml filename="creatingminlayout.html"?>
    1010
    11   <title>Creating a limited directory layout in LFS filesystem</title>
     11  <title>Creating a Limited Directory Layout in the LFS Filesystem</title>
    1212
    1313  <para>In this section, we begin populating the LFS filesystem with the
     
    4242  <note>
    4343    <para>
    44       LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
     44      The LFS editors have deliberately decided not to use a
    4545      <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename> directory.  Several
    46       steps are taken so that the toolchain does not use it. If for any
     46      steps are taken to be sure the toolchain will not use it. If for any
    4747      reason this directory appears (either because you made an error in
    48       following the instructions, or because you install a binary package that
    49       creates it after finishing LFS), it may break the instructions given in
    50       the book. You should often ensure that this directory is non-existent.
     48      following the instructions, or because you installed a binary package that
     49      created it after finishing LFS), it may break your system.
     50      You should always be sure this directory does not exist.
    5151    </para>
    5252  </note>
  • chapter07/creatingdirs.xml

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    7171  <warning>
    7272    <para>
    73       The FHS does not enforce the existence of the directory
     73      The FHS does not mandate the existence of the directory
    7474      <filename class="directory">/usr/lib64</filename>, and the LFS editors
    75       have decided not to use it. For the instructions in LFS and BLFS to work,
    76       it is imperative that this directory be non-existent. You should often
    77       check that it does not exist, because it is easy to inadvertently
    78       create it, which will likely break your system.
     75      have decided not to use it. For the instructions in LFS and BLFS to work correctly,
     76      it is imperative that this directory be non-existent. From time to time you should
     77      verify that it does not exist, because it is easy to create it
     78      inadvertently, and this will probably break your system.
    7979    </para>
    8080  </warning>
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